The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996.
The figure elucidates the amount of complaints made about noise to environmental health bureaucrat in New town from 1980 to 1996. At first glance, it is evident that the most noticeable changes occurred for the total of complaints for the noise of road works.
To begin with, the complaints of the road works and the traffic noise remained stable for the first 4 years, and plunged sharply approximately to 400 for road works and two-thirds of 300 for traffic noise. Afterwards, the number of road works’ and traffic noise complaints jumped dramatically over the following 8 years, soaring to just above 1200 and 600 respectively.
In contrast, 1980 to 1996 witnessed a gradual drop for domestic or household’s complaints where it, initially, stood at well beneath four-fifths of 1000 and finished at well under 200 in 1996. In accordance with factories, there was a remarkable upsurge for factories’ complaints between 1980, which made up at 400, and 1990, which constituted at well beyond 600. Unfortunately, it plummeted moderately in the next 6 years to just above 600.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, third, well, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18644067797 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11862359774 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604519774011 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8593368513 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.142857143 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213845587882 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108287280443 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104858380685 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15670732334 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820717541439 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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