The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors in thousands to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors (in thousands) to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph describes information on foreign visitors to three different areas of European country from 1987 to 2007.

Overall, what stands out from the graph is that the number of visitors to those three areas all rose considerably and there were some fluctuations during the period. Another interesting point is that the coast and the lake the mountain were the areas most visited by overseas tourists.

It can be seen that the coast started at 40 thousand foreigners visitors, the highest point in the first year. Then there was a negligible decrease to under 40 thousand in 1992. The coast saw a steady growth to reach the peak of 70 thousand, there was precisely the same amount of overseas visitors as the lake the mountain. After that, the figure of the coast plunged to 55 thousand foreign tourists in 2007. If we look at the lake and the mountain this trend was similar, having remained stable at 10 thousand visitors in 1987. Before going down by under 70 thousand in the last year, the figure grew gradually to 75 thousand in 2002.

By contrast, Series 3 began at less than half of the coast at 20 thousand. Subsequently, there was a slight fluctuation until 2002. However, this was followed by a steady increase to 35 thousand in 2007.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, then, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75688073394 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53201452419 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559633027523 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8968606954 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4166666667 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221508704033 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865814036529 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991499105508 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176042614302 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131379447842 0.0819641961636 160% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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