The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the number of foreign visitors traveling to three different areas in a European country from 1987 to 2007. Overall, There was an increase in the number of travelers in both 3 areas. The coast had the most visitors traveling while the figure for the mountains was the least
In 1987, there were 10 thousand travelers visiting the mountains, that number had doubled for the lakes ( 20 thousand) and quadruped for the coast ( 40 thousand ). Despite having the lowest number of visitors in the first year, the mountains surpassed the lakes in 1992, with 25 thousand of visitors. Only the coast saw a decline in the number of travelers, with a drop of roughly 5 thousand compared to 1987.
From 1992 to 2007, there was an upward trend in the number of tourists visiting the lakes which rapidly rose to 50 thousand people and reached the highest point of 75 thousand visitors, surpassing the lakes. In addition, the number of travelers coming to the lakes grew steadily and stood at approximately 72 thousand people in 2007, the highest point recorded from the whole period. It seemed that the number of tourists traveling to the mountains went up and down several times, fluctuating from 20 to 35 thousand visitors and finally reaching the highest point in the last year ( 35 thousand ).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s, that number had doubled for the lakes 20 thousand and quadruped for the coast ...
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... 20 thousand and quadruped for the coast 40 thousand . Despite having the lowest ...
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...and quadruped for the coast 40 thousand . Despite having the lowest number of vis...
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...ching the highest point in the last year 35 thousand .
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...hest point in the last year 35 thousand .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85201793722 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53108672313 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497757847534 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5572621266 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.25 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.875 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142074003058 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087617921313 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105343302648 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11923233091 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753498106283 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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