The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The pattern of working and other life activities has gone through transformations during the last 5 decades. As indicated in the pie chart, working occupied 33% of an working adult's life and time spent on travelling to work was only 2% whereas in 2008, the time of spending in both working and commuting has increased to 42% and 8% respectively.
Except working and working-related activities, proportion of other activities have also shifted. Back in 1958, hanging out with friends and families took 19% and it dropped to only 6% in 2008. People rather spend their time alone than staying with others. In addition, instead of going out, people may find relaxing at home is a better way to spend their leisure time. The percentage of this activity has uplifted from 8% to 13%.
Moving on the sleeping time, since the working hours are longer than before. The sleeping time is shortened by 7% in 2008 comparing to 1958. The pressure brought by working result in less relaxing and sleeping time. As for other interest or sports, slight increase from 6% to 8% occurred in this category. Sports is another way to relaser pressure and also benefits the mental and physical health.
In general, the overall trend of the working and leisuring time has shifted towards longer working hours. In addition, people are prefer staying at home and realx rather than going outside.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... the pie chart, working occupied 33% of an working adults life and time spent on t...
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Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
...art, working occupied 33% of an working adults life and time spent on travelling to wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, whereas, as for, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93103448276 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57526420611 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581896551724 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0437090346 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7142857143 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20800887101 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711766695634 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060305781622 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127064449235 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555145906328 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.