The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018
The provided line graph illustrates the fluctuation of closure and opening shop phenomena in a specific country over a seven-year period, from 2011. Overall, it is clear that while there was a dramatic rise in the number of shop closures in the second half of the surveyed period, the status of openings decreased significantly throughout seven years.
According to the chart, the number of closed shops in the certain country started at over 6000 units and fluctuated slightly until 2014 before witnessing the dramatic plummet in 2015 which reached only around 500 shops being closed. However, the phenomenon of closures rose up again and remained steadily at approximately 5000 until the year 2018.
Moving to the opening factor, the line chart experienced a deeply downward trend, which began at 8500 shops opening in 2011 and reached 4000 units in the following year. Although there was a rise of 2000 shops being opened over the next two-year period, it continued to suffer a decline in 2015 and stayed with the same number of the 2012 status, which witnessed around 4000 shops starting operating, followed by another dwindle of approximately 1000 shops being able to run that surveyed 3000 opening shops in 2018.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...atic rise in the number of shop closures in the second half of the surveyed perio...
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Line 2, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... over 6000 units and fluctuated slightly until 2014 before witnessing the dramati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08457711443 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5669134823 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577114427861 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.6623882703 43.030603864 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.333333333 112.824112599 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333741165808 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165253324042 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699960172055 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231350349827 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353487968694 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.2329268293 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.