The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph belows give information about the number of tourists visiting the Caribbean island from 2010 to the year 2017.
Overall, the visitors who chose to stay on cruise ships increased sharply while there was a fall in the number of visitors staying on island. The total tourists visiting here had increase steadily.
Firstly, there was approximately 250.000 people chose to stay on ships. This had a fluctuation between 2010 and 2012. Then in 2013, this went to 500.000 tourists. There was a one-million people who booked into cruise ships in 2014 and continued to rise steadily. In 2017, this reached 1.5 millions of visitors.
Secondly, the visitors stayed on island had some fluctuation. In 2010, there were 750.000 individuals and it stayed unchanged in 2011. Then, there were a significant increased in 2012 and a rise stedily in 2013. In the year 2013, it were a 1.5 millions visitors and it was stable from 2013 to 2015. A small fall in 2016 when it had about 1.25 millions. And in 2017, it reached again to 1.5 millions.
Thridly, while there had a rise in number of visitors staying on ships and a fall on booking on island, there was a significant increase in total between 2010 and 2017. This was only 1 millions people in 2010 but in 2017, it was about 3.5 millions of visitors.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
... rise steadily. In 2017, this reached 1.5 millions of visitors. Secondly, the visitors staye...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
...ple in 2010 but in 2017, it was about 3.5 millions of visitors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72807017544 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5350725429 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434210526316 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.925269658 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.375 112.824112599 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.25 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165623776444 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639030953116 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930094379184 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139236980301 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127984524184 0.0819641961636 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
... rise steadily. In 2017, this reached 1.5 millions of visitors. Secondly, the visitors staye...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
...ple in 2010 but in 2017, it was about 3.5 millions of visitors.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72807017544 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5350725429 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434210526316 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.925269658 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.375 112.824112599 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.25 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165623776444 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639030953116 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930094379184 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139236980301 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127984524184 0.0819641961636 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.