The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph lists the percentages populations of 3 countries ( japan, sweden and the USA ) by aged 65 and over during a century period between 1940 and 2040. In general, the three countries growth of proportion are fluctuated as long as eight decades ,and again increased strongly during two last decades from 2020 to 2040 respectivelý.
Looking at the detail, the proportion of population who aged 65 and above in japan started drops from approximately 5% to below 5% between 1940 and 1980 while the USA and sweden had increase gradually. They were started about 5% to 10% respectively ,and had been improve continously almost 15% during four decades. Moreover, the predicted that the percentages of sweden and the USA will keep growing over 20% in 2040.
On the other hand, japan shows fantastic trend of the proportion. Since above 1980, japan started increase continously every year ,and significantly jump up to over 25% around 2030 to 2040 respectively.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The line graph lists the percentages populations of 3 countries japan, sweden and the USA by aged 65 and over during a century period between 1940 and 2040.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to percentages and populations
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, proper
Suggestion: Refer to countries and japan
Sentence: In general, the three countries growth of proportion are fluctuated as long as eight decades ,and again increased strongly during two last decades from 2020 to 2040 respectivel?.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to countries and growth
Sentence: They were started about 5 to 10 respectively ,and had been improve continously almost 15 during four decades.
Error: continously Suggestion: continuously
Sentence: Since above 1980, japan started increase continously every year ,and significantly jump up to over 25 around 2030 to 2040 respectively.
Error: continously Suggestion: continuously
flaws:
'respectively' is not used properly.
No. of Words: 159 200 //need more content
We are expecting:
No. of Words: 175 while No. of Different Words: 100
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 7 10
No. of Words: 159 200
No. of Characters: 775 1000
No. of Different Words: 95 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.551 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.874 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.778 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 49 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 38 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.714 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.478 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.465 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.677 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.059 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e percentages populations of 3 countries japan, sweden and the USA by aged 65 an...
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Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f 3 countries japan, sweden and the USA by aged 65 and over during a century per...
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Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... are fluctuated as long as eight decades ,and again increased strongly during two ...
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Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... drops from approximately 5% to below 5% between 1940 and 1980 while the USA and ...
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Line 4, column 250, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ere started about 5% to 10% respectively ,and had been improve continously almost ...
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Line 4, column 265, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...ut 5% to 10% respectively ,and had been improve continously almost 15% during four deca...
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... started increase continously every year ,and significantly jump up to over 25% ar...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'look', 'moreover', 'while', 'in general', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230769230769 0.268076937826 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.10989010989 0.116061578633 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0274725274725 0.0759168565197 36% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0824175824176 0.0366838410393 225% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.00549450549451 0.0131127313244 42% => OK
Prepositions: 0.153846153846 0.155750635184 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0384615384615 0.0379272487307 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81940643545 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0274725274725 0.0210936926555 130% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0769230769231 0.0948980150116 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00549450549451 0.00437022459523 126% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00549450549451 0.00967000014798 57% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 972.0 1161.00487805 84% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.9 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.11320754717 5.90752243213 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.314465408805 0.337110787985 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.245283018868 0.247514529752 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169811320755 0.171178102325 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138364779874 0.112407865282 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81940643545 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62893081761 0.546246751206 115% => OK
Word variations: 57.9037872862 49.3433353143 117% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 22.7142857143 23.0094962315 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8531873507 42.9750493124 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.857142857 135.714022679 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 23.0094962315 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.689975730869 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.48048780488 473% => OK
Readability: 47.2425876011 47.7609492067 99% => OK
Elegance: 2.13888888889 2.94281807926 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.575091416119 0.418131533498 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113821816348 0.181151798455 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0661568800391 0.0850326197045 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.642200729166 0.706616315825 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132049629626 0.157042692854 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.30624232795 0.228904883108 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.184763274862 0.108899403657 170% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.429734003091 0.367819155151 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0709010441276 0.0812612215331 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.423357563652 0.316326947829 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12362706943 0.0921553760075 134% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70731707317 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.