A survey was conducted by a private organization about the population percent changes during 1000 years in different countries. A part of the observations is shown in the graph given. It shows the data of a population of age span 65 years and above. Here, three countries are considered which are USA, Sweden, and Japan as these countries had more fluctuations compared to other countries. Observations made are mentioned below.
Measurement of USA population shows highest in 1940, which shows that the USA had more senior citizens than the other two countries from 1940 to 1990 as the graph is above both other graphs during this span. The population of senior citizen risen during two time spans i.e. 1940 to 1980 and 2019 to 2040. Population difference from 1940 to 2040 in the USA is approx 13 to 14 units.
Sweden almost faced a rise in the said population except for two spans which are 1980 to 1990 and 2010 to 2020. Sweden had contained the highest population from 2010 to 2030. Population difference in Sweden from 1940 to 2040 is 17 to 18 units.
Japan faced the lowest population during 1940 but turned out be the highest at the end i.e. in 2040. Population difference in Japan from 1940 to 2040 is 22 to 23 units. Japan faced the lowest population in the year 1960 which was almost 2 to 3 units. Japan faced a drastic change in the year 2030 to 2031 that is 15 units.
Overall, it states that Japan had the highest increase in the senior citizen population compares to Sweden and the USA. Also, the USA had a decrease in the population causing Sweden population changes at a moderate level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 3.97073170732 479% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 965.302439024 138% => OK
No of words: 285.0 196.424390244 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6701754386 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54747474526 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438596491228 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 283.868780488 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9734183212 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2941176471 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.70588235294 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.09268292683 342% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191233352732 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790721930822 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494279343468 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116888273811 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370297718788 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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