The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the percentages of people at 65 years old and above in three different countries in 100 years period.
It is clear that the percentages of elderly will be much higher in 2040 than in 1940 in all three countries. Japan had the lowest percentage of elderly in 1940, but it will become the highest one in 2040 as predicted.
In 1940, there were about 9% of American aged 65 and over, compared to about 7% of Swedish and 5% of Japanese. After 1940, the percentages in the USA and Sweden increased gradually until 1990 to about 15%. in contrast, the percentage of elderly in Japan remained under 5% during this period.
In about 1995, the percentage of elderly in Sweden overtook the percentage of elderly in the USA and became the highest percentage of elderly in these three countries. All percentages of elderly in these countries will see a dramatic rise from 2030. The figure of Japan will overtake the figure in the other two counties by 2032 respectively and become the highest percentage as predicted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ased gradually until 1990 to about 15%. in contrast, the percentage of elderly in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87777777778 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85851554327 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494444444444 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.6790891522 43.030603864 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.333333333 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109519332768 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593607708878 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636719530716 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827927736726 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357301249422 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.