The graph shows Japanese average monthly salary (Yen) from 1953 to 1983, and the prices of black and white television and color television during the same period.
The given line chart illustrates the number of monthly wage on average (Yen) and how much black and white TV and color television cost measured in Japan during the 30-year period.
It can clearly be seen that there was an opposite movement in the figure for average monthly salary and the changes in the cost of black and white TV and colored TV over the period of three decades, starting in 1953. In particular, in the year of 1953, black and white tv reached the highest price while Japanese average monthly salary was much lower than that.
According to the given information, at the beginning of the survey (1953), the price of black and white tv stood at 110000 Yen, compared to just around 20000 Yen of average monthly wage. There were no statistics of colored tv at the same time. However, after several years black and white television's price dropped significantly to just 40000 Yen by 1963, while the initial cost of colored tv was 100000 Yen, which was at least five times as high as that for average salary each month.
As illustrated, it is noticeable that the price of colored tv outnumbered that of black and white tv and average monthly wage (60000 Yen and roughly 30000 Yen, respectively). In 1983, nearly 70000 Yen was the number of the mean monthly salary, with that figure for the cost of colored tv not far behind (under 50000 Yen).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed in Japan during the 30-year period. It can clearly be seen that there was an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while, at least, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.625 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32018617548 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495833333333 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.0450525987 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.75 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415602182836 0.215688989381 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208615353862 0.103423049105 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065330879843 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279372966408 0.15604864568 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261864536073 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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