The graph shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The provided line graph illustrates millions of visitors staying on the cruise ships and on the Caribbean island, and also includes its combined number from 2010 to 2017.
Overall, the total number of tourists was increasing substantially, with visitors on the island and on the cruise ships having the opposite trend, where the former was on the top for about five consecutive years and finally was overtaken by tourists on cruise ships.
The total number of visitors on an island had moderate increase from 2010, resulting in the total of 2.7 million viewers in 2015. It then rose rapidly by 0.8 in the final year.
Initially, tourists staying on the island was around 0.8 million which remained stable for a year before doubling to 1.5 million in 2013. The number again was constant for two years that dropped sharply by around 1.3 million in 2016, and rose by same pace to the same number as in the year 2015.
The number of the tourists on the cruise ships followed the opposite trend. The data rose by 0.2 million in the first year and fell to the previous record in 2012, after which it escalated upward surpassing visitors on island in the mid of 2015 and finally reached to 2 million viewers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 77, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75355450237 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35487324505 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497630331754 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7110150584 43.030603864 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.375 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.375 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20494807679 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100715712181 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758244589087 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132788984487 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678718100289 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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