The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012.

Essay topics:

The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012.

The graph describes comparison in percentage between male and female as staff members of various departments of major universities in 2012.

It can be depicted that comparison is done from 0 to 100 % at interval of 20%. We can observe a similar pattern in Business, Engineering, Law and Science, the highest of male employee goes above 80% and lowest falls nearly to 20%, in Engineering and Education, Respectively. It is also seen that percentage of male employee in Business and Science are almost similar.

The similar pattern can be seen in Arts (above 40%) and Education (Nearly to 80%), where female members are involved in higher percentage than male. Moreover, it describes that female members are bottomed out in Engineering, i.e. below 20%.
Medicine is complete exception as the percentage are almost similar for both, nearly to 40%.

Overall, we can see that male staff members are towering in percentage as compared to female in 2012.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 636.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 126.0 196.424390244 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04761904762 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35036895883 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8368320527 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2597119116 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 5.23603664747 6% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308402272375 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174648171328 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181446112704 0.0843802449381 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244608716474 0.15604864568 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183140450688 0.0819641961636 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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