The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups

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The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups.

The given charts give information about how many hours people have to work a week by different occupation groups and the stress levels of each group.

Overall, it can be seen that people who work as lecturers are required to work a smaller number of hours compared to other professions, while the opposite is true for businessmen. In addition, the ratio of lecturers who suffer from stress take up the largest part and programmers are less likely to endure this situation.

From the first chart, four groups of jobs including lecturers, chefs, lawyers and programmers work for merely 40 hours or less a week, and lecturers work the least of all (around 25 hours). However, the rest four groups work more than 40 hours every week and businessmen are the busiest people working up to 70 hours, almost triple compared to lecturers' weekly working hours.

Looking at the pie chart, one in four people who are struggling with stress are lecturers. Followed by movie producers, doctors, businessmen and chefs with 18%, 15%, 11% and 10%, respectively. Moreover, the figures for writers and lawyers are alike (8%), while the proportion of programmers being stressed is the least one, at only 5%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...programmers work for merely 40 hours or less a week, and lecturers work the least of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, moreover, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59422435421 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4963766213 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219177091795 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965484873946 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699540916173 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141443970427 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652294681654 0.0819641961636 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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