In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining.
Why do you think this is happening?
How can this issue be solved?
In these days, most countries have undergone several significant developments in all aspect with the invention of numerous contemporary items that are favorable for human’s life. However, together with the advancement of the community, it also results in the decline of lots of animals and plants. From my perspective, this phenomenon is derived from distinctive reasons and can be countered by some appropriate measures.
The decline of animals and plants in some regions is brought about due to the following reasons. The main cause of this phenomenon is human activities, people now are carrying out several proposals of removing several forests which is the natural habitat for wild animal and house of countless a living organism of the kind exemplified by trees, shrubs, herbs and grasses to make room for the construction of some buildings with different purposes such as resort for the development of tourism industry or skyscrapers for both domestic and international visitors. Another reason that leads to this phenomenon is overexploiting wood or hunting for recreational purposes. In current society, some people cut down many trees or destroy some habitat of plants to improve their economic status or ignore the law not to hunt animals in the absence of permission of supreme authorities to keep hunting animals illegally without concerning about consequences which make most animals on the verge of extinction.
There are several measures that can be tackled by the government the reduction in the number of animals and plants. To begin with, the government should give a serious penalty for people who destroy forest intentionally because most people seem not to neglect the consequences of deforestation such as flood, erosion and others that can have negative impact on humans’ life, so the government should enact some practical laws to prevent the forest which is house of numerous animals and plants from being threatened by human activities. In addition, the government had better encourage their citizens to partake in some events that is beneficial to animals and plants such as planting trees to improve either ecosystem and natural habitat of animals or handing out flyers to raise awareness of people to protect the existence of animals and plants.
Decreasing population figures for animal and plant species is a critical issue that demands immediate attention and action. It is humanity’s collective responsibility to protect and restore the natural world given the origin of these issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 364, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... exemplified by trees, shrubs, herbs and grasses to make room for the constructio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3567839196 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89813855616 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530150753769 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.711298017 49.4020404114 263% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.666666667 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1666666667 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198633770501 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08243270571 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441556100736 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117362464759 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251777102574 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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