households owning and renting accommodation in England and Wales in 1918 to 2011
The given line chart above illustrates the proportion of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales for over 93 year-period from 1918 to 2011.
Overall, It can be seen that the percentage of households in owned accommodation decreased significantly between 1918 and 2011. Otherwise the proportion of households in rented accommodation increased slightly through out the period.
In the first year the percentage of household in owned accommodation reached the peak at over 70 percent. In the following years the figures dropped down dramatically to 2001 and stopped at 30 percent. After ten year the proportion went up slightly at over 30 percent.
Whereas in 1918 the proportion of household in rented was just over 20 percent. After 53 years the percentage increased noticeably and had the same figure with the proportion of household in owned accommodation. After that the proportion increased slightly and reached peak in 2001 at approximately 70 percent. But the figures dropped slightly in the last year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...ed significantly between 1918 and 2011. Otherwise the proportion of households in rented ...
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Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...rented accommodation increased slightly through out the period. In the first year the perc...
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Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ally to 2001 and stopped at 30 percent. After ten year the proportion went up slightl...
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...on went up slightly at over 30 percent. Whereas in 1918 the proportion of household in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33536585366 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15989588417 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463414634146 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6968452689 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352360368443 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153098620355 0.103423049105 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159962104191 0.0843802449381 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278272656982 0.15604864568 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174918728725 0.0819641961636 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.