Line Graph and Pie Chart(Crime in the UK)
Given are two figures a graph line and a pie chart illustrating the rate of people who convict crime of different ages in the UK, while the second figure points out the proportion of males and females in the British prison system.
It is obvious that convicte crime at age of twenties reach the peak for males and females with different rate of increase. Male rate surges markedly from 2 percent at the age of ten to a little less than 16 which the highest point. After this, the criminal number decreases dramatically to be on a period of stability at the age of fourties at 8 percent. Finally, at the age of sixties it reaches merely 2 perecent. The alarming rate of females, meanwhile, is approximaxtaly 5 perecnt at the age of twenties. A continuous decline of offender is from the mid twenties into mid fourties. Eventally, there is no criminal females at the age of sixties. Similary, there is no offender at the age of tenth.
Consequently, the highest proportion of inmates in the British is males as men outnumber 24 out 1 women. 96 perecnt of prison inmates are males which is the major number while the remainders are females.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ge of ten to a little less than 16 which the highest point. After this, the crimi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64039408867 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72813912587 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541871921182 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7026818916 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6363636364 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112691034061 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361996010689 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097910659312 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118854816254 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157589576729 0.0819641961636 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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