The line graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph demonstrates the carbon dioxide in metric tonnes that a person emits in 4 European countries from 1967 to 2007.
Overall, Italy and Portugal experienced an upward trend in general during the forty-year period in carbon dioxide emissions while the United Kingdom and Sweden showed an opposite pattern.It is clear that the CO2 emissions in the United Kingdom were higher than those of other countries.
According to the graph, it is manifest that the UK possesses the most carbon dioxide emissions in the year 1967, which was accounted for approximately 11 metric tonnes per person. Subsequently, this number witnessed a marginal decrease and eventually hit the lowest point, less than 9 metric tonnes in 2007. Simultaneously, in Sweden, after a significant increase from 8 to around 11 metric tonnes CO2 in a decade between 1967 and 1977, there was a substantial decrease in the amount of CO2 emissions throughout the given period, made up just above 5 metric tonnes.
On the other hand, the production of carbon dioxide emissions per individual in Portugal and Italy began from around 1 and 4 metric tonnes, respectively. Particularly, both of these countries saw upward trends, with Italy’s emissions peaking at about 8 metric tonnes and Portugal’s at around 5 in 1997. Both of them still remained stable until 2007.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 188, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, while, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15596330275 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85979652398 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577981651376 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.3578131672 43.030603864 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291240125778 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126844383419 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746004478496 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187264610952 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370853657551 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.