The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different attractions.
The line chart provided illustrates how many holidaymakers visited four separate places of interest in Scotland over a 30-year period from 1980 to 2010.
Overall, the percentage of travelers visiting castles and zoos increased while the opposite was true for aquariums and festivals over the period. Furthermore, among the places, castle was the most popular destination.
In 1980, the percentage of tourists who came to castles was about a quarter, which was considerably higher than the figure for zoos, accounting for only 10%. Over the following 20 years, the popularity of castles rocketed and reached a peak of approximately 45% in 1995, before declining significantly to just over 30% in 2010. By contrast, there was a slight fluctuation in the number of zoo visitors between 10% and 15% in the first 20 years, followed by a dramatic increase to 20% at the end of the period.
Regarding the remaining attractions, festivals were the most popular in 1980 with 30% of tourists and the figure for aquariums was 20%. By 1985, the percentage of travelers going to aquariums had peaked at nearly 35%, followed by a collapse to 20% in the following five years. After that, the figure suffered a moderate reduction to just under 10% in 2010. Meanwhile, the popularity of festivals experienced a gradual decrease throughout the period, dropping by 10% to 20% in 2010.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, regarding, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1017699115 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90466757868 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544247787611 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9442189482 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.3 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.099907670191 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399513237888 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499644351278 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741499374773 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449389124924 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.