The line graph shows the income of four cafes in New York over last year.
The line graph describes the income of four cafes in New York, including The Tea Room, Internet Express, Wi-fi Café and café cool over the last year. Generally, most cafes gained higher earnings, except for the tea room.
For instance, The Tea Room, after significant fluctuations for the first ten months between 120 and 180 thousand dollars, declined significantly to a low of 50 thousand in December. Wifi Café and Internet Express, strikingly, revealed quite the same pattern of change. While the figure of the former experienced dramatic ups and downs between 50 and 100 thousand dollars for the first nine months, before reaching a peak of nearly 190 thousand in the last month, that of the latter was approximately 1.6 times lower in the rate of income. By comparison, despite a slight decline from 100 in January to 80 thousand in April, Internet Express stabilized for the next three months, followed by a soar to the highest point of 140 thousand dollars in December.
Interestingly, only in the middle of October did Internet Express, Wi-fi Café and The Tea Room enjoy the same amount of revenue.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, except for, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98930481283 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64396188955 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3427384595 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.285714286 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150966479596 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802614216403 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165730552973 0.0843802449381 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136278057107 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183884603342 0.0819641961636 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.