The map below shows the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fonton, a neighbouring town, since 1962
The map provides information about the development of a village called Meadowside and its neighboring town Fonton from 1962 to the present.
Generally, the two places expanded in size and witnessed a great change in the development of the infrastructures. Noticeably, Meadowside and Fonton are no longer separated from each other and are now merged together.
In 1962, both Meadowside and Fonton were completely separated from each other with no railway or road connecting them. While there was a railway that goes through Fonton which is located in the east of the map, there was no railway pass through Meadowside village, situated in the west of Fonton, but only a small road runs along it.
In 1985, there was a considerable increase in the size of both Meadowside village and its neighborhood, moreover, the small road had converted into a big main road that connects the two areas. Furthermore, the village saw a dramatic change in its infrastructure, with new buildings being constructed (housing estate, leisure complex, and a superstore).
Currently, Meadowside village, which has become Meadowside suburbs and Fonton is. In addition, the railway has extended in the northwest of Fonton which leads to the station in the center of the two areas. Furthermore, more facilities and buildings for recreation such as a business park, a hotel, and a station have been built in the center of the map.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'run'?
Suggestion: run
...e west of Fonton, but only a small road runs along it. In 1985, there was a consi...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, moreover, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15217391304 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97507287325 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526086956522 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5695475732 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259963370174 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104470757777 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059676774264 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1509635376 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590760675707 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'run'?
Suggestion: run
...e west of Fonton, but only a small road runs along it. In 1985, there was a consi...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, moreover, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15217391304 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97507287325 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526086956522 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5695475732 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259963370174 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104470757777 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059676774264 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1509635376 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590760675707 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.