The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services - to the UK economy in the twentieth century.
The bar chart provides information about the UK economy which was contributed by three selected factors (agriculture, manufacturing, business and financial services) between 1900 and 2000. Units are measured in percentage.
Overall the contribution of the three sectors witnessed a dramatic change over a century. As opposed to the significant dip in the contribution of agriculture and manufacturing, that of business and financial services boomed remarkably.
In 1900. agriculture contributed the most of the three factors, accounting for nearly 50% of the UK economy. The percentage of contribution of manufacturing and business and financial services was around 45% and 5% respectively. Fifty years later, in 1950, the percentage of contribution of agriculture increased slightly, standing at just above 50%. Similarly, that of business and financial services rocketed from around 5% to approximately 12%. Yet, the contribution of manufacturing in 1950 had a marginal fall, at 40%.
In the second half of the century, the contribution of agriculture plummeted from 10% in 1975 to nearly 0% in 2000. Likewise, manufacturing observed a noticeable drop to around 40% and 20% in 1975 and 2000, respectively. On the contrary, the percentage of contribution of Business and Financial services soared to roughly 45% in 2000, making it the biggest contributor to the UK economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Agriculture
...services boomed remarkably. In 1900. agriculture contributed the most of the three facto...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, likewise, second, similarly, so, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59047619048 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44506614242 2.65546596893 130% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504761904762 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7210024615 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8333333333 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393836257834 0.215688989381 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133957287891 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883002528539 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249911357926 0.15604864568 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460731458188 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.