The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and present

Essay topics:

The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and present.

The images illustrate a seaside village’s growth between 1995 and now.
As can be inferred from the map, the main difference is the farmland and forest park. In addition, opposite the farmland, housing has been increased.
In 1995, in the Northeastern side of the map, farmland and forest park took up the majority of the village, possibly due to the village’s reliance on agricultural product. Opposite to it, housing has been made to accommodate people who had lived there before and those who wish to settle there. However, over the years, the village has experienced a few changes. Due to the increasing number of settler and tourists, the farmland and forest park has been replaced by a golf course and tennis facility. Housing increased dramatically in order to accommodate many newcomers into the village.
Previously, to the South, there had been a fishing port and fish market for sailors to turn in their catches and sell them and opposite to the fish market are a row of shops that may have sold various other products. Across the shops, a hotel and café were located in the southeastern corner. With the village’s overhaul, these locations have seen notable changes the shops and fish market has been replaced with restaurants and apartments, respectively. The fishing port has been removed and the hotel has a new car park, with the only location remain unchanged is the café.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99572649573 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71483251451 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57264957265 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0321255456 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4166666667 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116289950846 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512919839968 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887052392948 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112538822216 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117092146678 0.0819641961636 143% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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