The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.
Given are the two maps delineating the modifications in a bookstore’s layout since the first year of the 21 century.
Perceptibly, the locations for different types of books have been neatly arranged to give space for customers to enjoy café and reading books.
Over the years, the area which is opposite the entrance where bookstore’s customers could find out information for travelling remains unchanged. Likewise, to its right-hand side, there is the section for new books which is adjacent to the service desk on the corner.
By contrast, the rest has experienced drastic changes with the appearance of three tables and four chairs for each in the middle of the store where readers could find cookery, hobbies and art books in 2000. Additionally, a café next to the service desk has been newly added in the space which was used to be devoted for non-fiction books. Moreover, there used to be two large rooms devoted to fiction books which were one to the left of the area for travelling information and another to the back of the store. However, the former space has been separated into 4 smaller rooms to hold books for art, hobbies, cookery and fiction while the latter currently is used for non-fiction books.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the two maps delineating the modificati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, likewise, moreover, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92270531401 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6754040155 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56038647343 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.368115905 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.375 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0533323504859 0.215688989381 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292344991578 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454613174729 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0476766712543 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527760723675 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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