The maps show the changes of the town, 1920 – 2010.
The maps illustrate the alterations of the town from 1920 to 2010. At first glance, it is evident that the number of wheat farms has been replaced by numerous new houses.
To begin with the south part of the town, the position of wheat farms, which were located in the southeast of the railway and in the southwest of the town, had been replaced by a new high school and new houses, and a new primary school respectively. Nevertheless, the wheat silos remained unchanged over the entire period.
In accordance with the north of the town, the existence of caravan park and new houses had changed the place of the dairy farm in 1920 and these buildings are in the opposite of the new recreation reserve and numerous new houses. Furthermore, new hospital, various new houses, and new library were constructed running alongside a new road which connect to railway station and in the opposite of these buildings, there were new petrol station and supermarket. Last but not least, in between post office and caravan park, there was a new road which crossing the river and running to the north of the town.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, nevertheless, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73056994819 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52587352177 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507772020725 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9685422855 43.030603864 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.428571429 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145208544898 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101678295968 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149564932743 0.0843802449381 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128154223987 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824825320802 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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