The maps below show the changes that took place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014

Essay topics:

The maps below show the changes that took place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014.

The pictures illustrate some modifications that were made to the waterfront area of Darwin town in the years 2009 and 2014.
It is clear that the principal changes to the town were made to the facilities of the industrial area of the town. These involved the construction of a new swimming pool, a university building, and residential buildings.
Looking at the maps in more detail, we can see that in 2009, the industrial area covered most of the town but then in 2014, it was demolished to make way for a number of trees and other facilities. In the northwest corner of the area, there was a university building constructed in 2014. Moreover, it appears that a row of residential buildings was built in front of the old next to the university.
Turning to the other changes, in the center of Darwin, a part of the industrial area next to the lake was no longer present in 2014, and instead, a new swimming pool was constructed in the original area. Finally, we see the addition of a harbour in the seashore of the town, and a new footpath was erected to access there.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, moreover, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55958549223 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7748810965 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507772020725 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1993081408 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250263806053 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112260652284 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924298867712 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16876098244 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654689317133 0.0819641961636 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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