The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned
future development of the site.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant
The two maps display an industrial area that is a part of a town called Norbiton. One depicts its current state while the other one depicts how it would look like following planned development. Overall, all the factories will be demolished and in their place will be housings and other infrastructures such as school, medical centre, playground and shop.
At present, the industrial area is situated in the east of Norbiton. In the north is the farmland adjacent to a river running through the area. While in the south, there is a roundabout with two exits, one connects to the major road in the south and the other runs towards a factory in the east. There are factories on both sides of the road and surrounding the roundabout.
In the future, the roundabout will be added two more exits, one of which heading northwest while the other will head north and join a new bridge across the river leading to housing. In the south of the roundabout is a small roundabout connecting to the main road in the south. More facilities will be added, school and the playground in the east, shop and medical centre around the roundabout. New housings will also be built as a replacement for all the factories at present.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a new bridge across the river leading to housing. In the south of the roundabout ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69014084507 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65519419361 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511737089202 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4337983138 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8181818182 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.07954437895 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458942587504 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079511533812 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063677803429 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422237448136 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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