the maps show changes in a city in 1950 and now
The maps illustrate how a city has changed since 1950.
Overall, the city has changed considerably with the introduction of two large lakes and the relocation of a business area. The other important developments are that the housing buildings are expanded and more major roads are accessible for residents.
Looking at the maps in more detail, we can see that the addition of two lakes in the middle of the city divided the business district into two areas. Besides, the government building has been rebuilt into two new locations, located south of the two lakes and in the south of the map, respectively. After these developments, there has been the construction of a bridge, a dam to the east, and a river to the west of the lake.
Besides, the residential areas have been expanded significantly to meet the rapid growth in the population, which has risen tenfold, from 20.000 people to 200.000 people. To be more specific, there used to be an accommodation area surrounding the business one, but since 1950 it has been extended to the four sides of this city. There are also more roads linking the main facilities to support citizens' commutes. Finally, the airport in the southeast has been reconstructed into a bigger one.
- the maps show changes in a city in 1950 and now 78
- Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime to what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- The chart below shows five countries where australia students studied from 2004 to 2006 79
- The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people believe that it is a good idea that older people continue to work if it is possible for them to do Do you agree or disagree 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89473684211 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82647580108 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55980861244 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9366108586 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.3 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163853361658 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784125256723 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132175134061 0.0843802449381 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162806883898 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167976336784 0.0819641961636 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.