The maps show southside, a shopping mall, as it is now and plans for its development.
The given maps depict how Southside, which is a shopping centre, is planned to be developed in the future.
Overall, there will be significant forthcoming alterations in infrastructure and facilities.
Regaring the internal space of the shopping building, it is apparent that the noodle shop and cinemas will be demolished so as to make way for a row of new stores, including cosmetics store and gift shop which are between two shoe shops. Opposite to these shops, fashion stores will be added to the place next to supermarket. Furthermore, a beauty salon will be constructed on the top left-hand corner of the mall, where the play area for children used to be located; meanwhile, the near coffee shop will be substituted by an info centre.
When it comes to the department store, it will be expanded and cover the majority of the land which used to be the golf course. There will be two entrances instead of only one at the present, with a new one being put up in front of department centre. Moreover, in the future the fitness centre will vanish as a result of an extension of the car park.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The given maps depict how Southside, whi...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...dle shop and cinemas will be demolished so as to make way for a row of new stores, inclu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69430051813 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74479389524 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60621761658 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4503274078 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.25 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114398149735 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05451222156 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079021176359 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855640231341 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938817980095 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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