The given maps illustrate the number of changes that have taken place in a university campus from 2010 to the present day.
Overall, it is noteworthy that the university campus has remained unchanged in size. Additionally, the most noticeable alteration is the removal of a lawn and seating area and there have been significant changes in student accommodations and education building.
It is clear that a lake in the centre of the campus has remained unchanged over 11 years. Conversely, there have been some significant constructions. University offices in the north and to the right, a teaching block where arts and science were taught have been transformed into a science building and an arts building respectively. Similarly, student facilities including shops and offices in the south have replaced student accommodation.
The student residence in the north-west has been expanded with a building to the right and the other erected in the east. In addition, a new sideway has been constructed running from the south-east of the university campus. Conversely, the lawn and seating surrounding the lake in 2010 has been demolished. In a similar fashion, a restaurant and shops in the east have been knocked down by the end of the period show superseded by the aforementioned new student accommodation.
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 73
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced 73
- The diagram shows rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town 89
- The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010 56
- Many people still believe that riding a bicycle is the best way to get to places What are the advantages and disadvantages of using a bicycle these days 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: unchanged
...that the university campus has remained unchanged in size. Additionally, the most noticeable alte...
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Line 7, column 308, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "In a similar fashion" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...g the lake in 2010 has been demolished. In a similar fashion, a restaurant and shops in the east hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, similarly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27142857143 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13823975388 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495238095238 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6194709624 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.636363636 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223479474108 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879365932634 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586564404166 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152155388482 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599084776929 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.