The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015
The maps show how the recreational areas were replaced by residential sectors between the years 1980 and 2015.
Looking more closely the east sides of maps, there was a significant changes. The first one is that the fields were replaced by warehouses. The second one is that residential area was removed to Car lark and supermarket in the north-east corner. Furthermore, Groceries shop and block of flats were introduced in the side.
Turning to the west side of maps, tennis courts were altered to new sport center and car park in the below in the west. Also, a number of houses were built instead of old park and the park was moved next to them. In addition, there was the most notable change in the center of the town. The road was modified to circle shape.
To sum up, there were the greatest changes in the city in terms of building residential accommodations and recreational facilities.
- All parents want the best opportunities for their children There some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a children s life 56
- Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination Others think money and appearance are more important Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015 72
- In some countries there has been an increase in the number of parents who choose to educate their children at home instead of sending them to school 56
- Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination Others think money and appearance are more important Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 156 200
No. of Characters: 719 1000
No. of Different Words: 90 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.534 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.609 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.591 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 42 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 31 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.8 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.374 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.374 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.083 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 70, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'change'?
Suggestion: change
... sides of maps, there was a significant changes. The first one is that the fields were ...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ark was moved next to them. In addition, there was the most notable change in the...
^^
Line 4, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as modified to circle shape. To sum up, there were the greatest changes in the c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, second, so, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65061583407 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2031248205 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0872999109138 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349868534005 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823588813242 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745579017954 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114527149965 0.0819641961636 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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