The maps show the village park 10 years ago and the village car park now.
The two maps present the change happening in a particular park in last ten years.
Overall, this park has been modernized and become much more crowded than before , with more entertainment facilities but with less spare space.
Looking at the outside of the park , although the entrance still exits , a new cycle path has been added around the park and a new.The location of tennis court is unchanged but their number has been doubled than before. The children's play area has been seperated into two areas which are children's park and children's softplay area respectively.The car park is still located but now it can be used for 50 people instead 20 people.
Football pitch is the only facility that still remains the same after 10 years. The wood has been removed and toilets and cafe have been replaced this location.The boating lake is located in the place which is used to be a pond.This park has also added a picnic area in the left of the map .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The two maps present the change happening in a partic...
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...change happening in a particular park in last ten years. Overall, this park has ...
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...park , although the entrance still exits , a new cycle path has been added around...
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...lthough the entrance still exits , a new cycle path has been added around the par...
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...path has been added around the park and a new.The location of tennis court is unchang...
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...as been added around the park and a new.The location of tennis court is unchanged b...
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...nd childrens softplay area respectively.The car park is still located but now it ca...
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...nd childrens softplay area respectively.The car park is still located but now it ca...
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...d cafe have been replaced this location.The boating lake is located in the place wh...
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...ating lake is located in the place which is used to be a pond.This park has also ...
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...ded a picnic area in the left of the map .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68862275449 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4690138816 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62874251497 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7931620022 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191066355934 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939355950291 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03703699376 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113642525736 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389395844323 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.