Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend?
It is no doubt true that competitiveness is a beneficial quality for people. Competitiveness plays an integral role in people’s lives, and I strongly believe that this is a positive trend at the present day.
Competitiveness is the ruler to examine how effective people have in their life. This means that if people have a competitive characteristic in their mind, they can be a successful person. Moreover, competitiveness levels up their living quality day by day because they are usually jealous of people who have more valuable things. By this way, people not only enhance their own life but also improve the quality of the world because of their inventions. For example, because of the jealousy of his friends, Jeff Bezos wants to establish the biggest international chains around the world. In addition, people are under numerous pressures from many sides of their life. An ever-increasing number of people have to degrade their period of sleep to work and study because they do not want to leave behind other people.
In my opinion, I consider that this is a positive trend for various reasons. Firstly, this is one of the most prominent reasons to boost the quality of human’s life. Based on the competitiveness, there are more and more inventions which are released. Companies have to brainstorm and update as many advances as possible to introduce to their customer source. Secondly, competitiveness can stimulate human’s intelligence. This means that unless people live with competitiveness, people need to try hard by themselves to be a pioneer.
In conclusion, competitiveness is a good trend which humans need to spread widely to as many people as possible because the values which bring to every individual can boost their quality of life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13194444444 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10290802223 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538194444444 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6301111357 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.375 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279895874928 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987930186179 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712586093179 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199261831834 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640169633566 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.