In the past people wore their traditional clothes and followed their culture. These days most people wear similar clothes and therefore look very similar to one another. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
There is a big controversy surrounding clothes in the past and at the present. Although there are some merits of this problem, I would argue that there are far more demerits and in this essay I will give some examples to support my opinion.
The main perks of the trend towards similar clothes would make people easier to select. This means that people could spend less time on choosing any clothes to wear to go to any party. It is appropriate in the current trend when people usually have a propensity to live in a minimalism and fundamental style. For example, Japanese living’s style is ubiquitous around the world. Even this style is applied by more and more teenagers and young people due to the fact that they want to simplify their life. In addition, wearing similar clothes reduces the jealousy in many people’s minds. This can lead to a better and friendlier life in human.
Despite some positives I mentioned above, I would argue that similar clothes are a negative development for various reasons. Firstly, individuals need to keep and maintain their cultures by wearing traditional clothes. By this way, they not only upgrade their culture but also prove their love to their nations or cultures. Second, it is straightforward to distinguish between any culture when they gather together. Taking Vietnam as an example, there are 54 ethnic groups. They reunite in a meeting, it will be easier to find and call the exact name of the group if they wear their traditional clothes.
In conclusion, while there are a plethora of beneficial effects on this problem, I believe that it is better to keep strictly, maintain and pass the culture on to the next generation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87108013937 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63803797848 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554006968641 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3160289624 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.375 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332346352539 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983753196655 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727171500351 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158158564888 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095713309654 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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