The pie chart below shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make c

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The pie chart below shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent

The pie chart illustrates the main categories cause the low-quality land. The table gives information about the effects of these on three different regions in the last decade of the twentieth century.
Overall, there were three main reasons for land degradation were described in the pie chart and over-grazing was the most principle one. In the table, Europe had the highest proportion of unproductive land.
The over-grazing had the largest percentage, accounted for 35%. While the corresponding figure of deforestation was slightly lower, at 30%. The third reason is over-cultivation which represented 28%, higher than other reason by 21%.
Approximately one-fifth total land in Europe was degraded. This proportion in North America is 5%, lower than in Oceania, which was at 13%. The percentage figure of over-grazing in Oceania was the highest, at 11.3%, followed by Europe and North America at 5.5% and 1.5% respectively. In Europe, deforestation was the main category causing land degradation, made up 9.8%, higher than over-cultivation by 2.1%. While over-cultivation had the largest proportion in three categories in North America (3.3%), it did not affect Oceania. Beside over-grazing, land in Oceania is less productive because of deforestation, which accounted for 1.7%, was about nine times the corresponding figure in North America.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54368932039 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28534278825 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543689320388 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6923929728 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8461538462 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53846153846 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158159208784 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650578024007 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667526965427 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127742640689 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858327298611 0.0819641961636 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54368932039 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28534278825 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543689320388 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6923929728 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8461538462 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53846153846 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158159208784 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650578024007 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667526965427 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127742640689 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858327298611 0.0819641961636 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.