The pie chart below shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how there causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

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The pie chart below shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how there causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

The given pie chart illustrates the factors that had negative effects on agricultural land's productivity while the table demonstrates the proportion of land degradation in three main regions blue to those factors mentioned during 1990s.

To begin with, it is apparent from the pie chart that over-grazing was the major cause of land degrading on the world scale which constituted 35%. Following that was deforestation occupying 30% nearly similar to over-cultivation's statistic of 28%. besides, minor reasons are classified as 'Other' and accounted for 7%.

Moving on to the table data, obviously, Europe was leading the proportion of land degraded of 23%. Moreover, deforestation and over-cultivation's rate was also the highest among 3 areas with 98% and 7.7% respectively. Meanwhile, the most striking feature was Oceania's figure, despite being extremely effected by over grazing, this group of island experienced 0% of over-cultivation's. besides, North America had the least percentage of land degradation because all of its statistics were no more than 5%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'during the 1990s'.
Suggestion: during the 1990s
...regions blue to those factors mentioned during 1990s. To begin with, it is apparent from...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
... to over-cultivations statistic of 28%. besides, minor reasons are classified as Other ...
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Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
...nd experienced 0% of over-cultivations. besides, North America had the least percentage...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, so, while, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58641975309 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32999947593 2.65546596893 125% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.722222222222 0.547539520022 132% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4314915628 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.125 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173238267734 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669029917538 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859981828634 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136213998192 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940676222248 0.0819641961636 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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