The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie chart illustrates the percentage of main reasons in agricultural land become less and less productive. Moreover, the given table indicates the proportion of regions affected of the world, categorised in 3 different reasons, within a period of 90s.
Overall, in pie chart, the percentage of worldwide land damaged by deforestation was dominant. It is also worth pointing out that Europe which country was the most hit by 3 main causes.
To begin with, it is reported that there were 30% worldwide land caused by deforestation, followed by the figure for over-cultivation which was lower than that by 2%. Meanwhile, over-grazing damaging to worldwide soil occupied about one third which was higher than that of other reasons by nearly 5 time.
Turning to the given table, the percentage of land degraded by deforestation in North America was the lowest hurt country while that of Europe show an opposite pattern. It is followed by the figure for Oceania was 1.7%. in addition to this, it is recorded that the percentage of North America land degradation caused by over-cultivation was 3.3%, which was roughly 2 times lower than that of Europe. Fortunately, Oceania was no longer damaged by over-cultivation. Furthermore, the proportions of total land degraded In North America, Europe, Oceania were 5%, 23% and 13%, respectively.
- The graph below giives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compari 73
- the society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose and can even be damaging Do you agree or disagree 56
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make 73
- The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual in come in 2007 2011 and 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 65
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, third, while, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23502304147 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14084966361 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539170506912 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0123948207 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.272727273 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164409653124 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697863718533 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814032135321 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121350607261 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095106175213 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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