The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full time and part time students about its services

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The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.

The given pie charts depict the analysis of a questionnaire that took place by a university about its two services (IT Support, and Current opening hours) between full-time and part-time students.
For the service of IT support, a significant portion (54% students) of full-time students are very happy with it as compared to part-time students where only 20% are joyful with the services. Only 15% of full-time students do not like the IT support service. Thirty-one percent of complete course students was seen which is almost same to that of the Part-time student’s survey. It was also shared with us that the part-time students (45%) hated the IT Support service.
The opening timing which was a pretty useful service has the maximum number for users in both full-time (87%) as well as part-time (72%) students. On contrast, only 1 percent and 5 percent full-time and part-time students were unhappy with the opening hours. 11 percent more part-time students (23%) were somewhat happy with as compared to full-time students (12%).
From the above pie charts it can be concluded that not all the students were happy with the IT support offered whereas maximum students were happy with the current opening hours.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...y 15% of full-time students do not like the IT support service. Thirty-one percent of ...
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...f full-time students do not like the IT support service. Thirty-one percent of complete...
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...us that the part-time students 45% hated the IT Support service. The opening ti...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
... that the part-time students 45% hated the IT Support service. The opening timing w...
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Message: Did you mean 'supports'?
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...he part-time students 45% hated the IT Support service. The opening timing which was...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... number for users in both full-time 87% as well as part-time 72% students. On contrast, on...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
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...at not all the students were happy with the IT support offered whereas maximum student...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, whereas, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57099202644 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5867235421 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449405008816 0.215688989381 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.235085307428 0.103423049105 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807897061454 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293286572014 0.15604864568 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118095572432 0.0819641961636 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The given pie charts depict the analysis of a questionnaire that too...
^^
Line 2, column 233, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...y 15% of full-time students do not like the IT support service. Thirty-one percent of ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'supports'?
Suggestion: supports
...f full-time students do not like the IT support service. Thirty-one percent of complete...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 442, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...us that the part-time students 45% hated the IT Support service. The opening ti...
^^
Line 2, column 444, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
... that the part-time students 45% hated the IT Support service. The opening timing w...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 451, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'supports'?
Suggestion: Supports
...he part-time students 45% hated the IT Support service. The opening timing which was...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... number for users in both full-time 87% as well as part-time 72% students. On contrast, on...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...at not all the students were happy with the IT support offered whereas maximum student...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, whereas, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57099202644 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5867235421 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449405008816 0.215688989381 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.235085307428 0.103423049105 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807897061454 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293286572014 0.15604864568 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118095572432 0.0819641961636 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.