The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate.
The two pie graphs compare the differents of cultural and leisure activities between boys and girls based on the survey.
Overall, the majority of the boys spent most of their time for playing computer games while the girls choosed dancing on their spare time. In comparison reading is becomes the least activity of the boys and listening to music for the girls.
From the first chart, we can conclude that a significant majority of the boys prefer to playing computer games by 34%, and at the second place basketball comes as most popular leisure activities followed by soccer, skate boarding and listening to music chosen by 17%, 11% and 10% students respectively and reading comes as the least popular leisure activities.
However, dancing seems the most popular leisure activities for the girls by 27%, then reading is comes for second most popular activities with 21% respondents instead only 2% of boys choosed for leisure activities, this is followed by 11% of the girls prefer gymnastic to fill their free time, and only 16% choosed computer games, then playing the netball and listening to music becomes the least activities for the girls which voted by 15% and 10% respectively
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during 1990s 73
- The graph below shows the proportion of for different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country 78
- The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children s activities The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate 67
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 69
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...choosed dancing on their spare time. In comparison reading is becomes the least activity o...
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Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'play'?
Suggestion: play
...nificant majority of the boys prefer to playing computer games by 34%, and at the secon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04545454545 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49540440788 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479797979798 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 146.482763491 43.030603864 340% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.8 112.824112599 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.6 22.9334400587 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22316273492 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15096483988 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109786313234 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174578496075 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108126498881 0.0819641961636 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 13.2329268293 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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