the plans below show the layout of a university's sports center now and how it will look after redevelopment.summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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the plans below show the layout of a university's sports center now and how it will look after redevelopment.
summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams show the sports center of a university in recent days and predict its appearance after being altered.

Overall, the most noticeable change would be seen in the construction of the area around the swimming pool.

At present, the gym which is situated to the north of the swimming pool is opposite to the reception. There are the changing room and seating area to the west and east of the swimming pool, respectively. The two outdoor courts are located on two sides of the center.

When it comes to the second diagram, the western outdoor courts will be demolished to make room for the leisure pool, whereas the eastern one is predicted to be replaced by a sports hall and two dance studios. A new sports shop and cafe are expected to be constructed on two sides of the reception. Two new changing rooms will be built next to the sports shop and cafe. In the north area, the gym will become double larger in size to the east.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...rn one is predicted to be replaced by a sports hall and two dance studios. A new sport...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ports hall and two dance studios. A new sports shop and cafe are expected to be constr...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 349, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...hanging rooms will be built next to the sports shop and cafe. In the north area, the g...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 417, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: larger
... north area, the gym will become double larger in size to the east.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57647058824 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42352941176 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541176470588 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1981061533 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4444444444 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0972966287323 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447127504199 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497605537195 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669696784899 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656748102399 0.0819641961636 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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