Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Humans always have a tendency to fight for the best until they achieve what they want. Although one section of people agree that it is wise to accept unfavorable situations like an unsatisfied job or lack of money, the other group of people opine that it is always better to improve such condition rather than just accepting. As fighter never quits, I believe that people must try again and again to improve the unfavorable conditions.
To begin with, lazy and weak people always have a tendency to sit in their comfort zone and deal with negative forces instead of fighting to curb those issues. Weak physical strength, mental wills and various social pressures may force a section of people not to deal with tough and ill situations like dissatisfied works and poor financial situations. For instance, the people of Arunachal, a state of India, never wants to improve their per ca-pita income even after they born in a naturally rich environment. They believe that in that high altitude situation no industry can flourish, and they have survive with the limited source of foods and survival means. It is solely their mind set issue and they never fight to improve the situation.
However, fighter never quits until they reach their goal. They have zeal to improve the situation in their favor. For instance, the people of Shillong, a state of India, similar to Arunachal Pradesh, always wants to improve their situation with limited resources. There is scarcity of water, no place to harvest, but they develop indigenous methods the store water like rain water harvesting, they adopt the step harvesting methods. Moreover, they promote their natural resources so wisely, that 80% of the state income are managed from tourism. Hence, if anyone decides to improve situation in their favor and never give up until situation improve, they can definitely achieve whatever they want.
To recapitulate, although many people accept their ill-situation as their destiny even once trying to improve those situation because of poor will power, a section of people never give up to any bad situation and try hard until they succeed to turn in their favor. Thus, people must try hard to improve any bad situation, no matter how hard that is.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 475, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'bore'?
Suggestion: bore
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Line 5, column 603, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'survived'.
Suggestion: survived
...no industry can flourish, and they have survive with the limited source of foods and su...
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Line 13, column 111, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this situation' or 'those situations'?
Suggestion: this situation; those situations
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 5.60731707317 678% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 33.7804878049 166% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 3.97073170732 428% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 965.302439024 194% => OK
No of words: 373.0 196.424390244 190% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02144772118 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 3.73543355544 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45699303105 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 106.607317073 180% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514745308311 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 283.868780488 206% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5859411463 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0625 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3125 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152734532019 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574443564644 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059684033685 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119034322686 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741565883964 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 40.7170731707 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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