The effect of law on a person's behavior has been a topic of debate these days. Some people believe that the law can change a person's behavior while others believe it has no effect. This essay will discuss how the law can change human behavior.
Some people believe that the law cannot change a person's behavior. Old habits die hard. It is a very common and popular adage. Humans repeat habitual actions. For example, criminals are often repeat offenders. The law did not stop them from doing the same actions. Thus, the law cannot change human inclinations and behavior.
On the other hand, people may believe that the law can change human behavior. Children, when taught at an early age to follow traffic rules, grow up to be law-abiding citizens because they were conditioned to be so. For example, a city in Germany teaches young students to follow traffic laws. They have the lowest rate of traffic-related accidents. This is tangible evidence that the law can change human behavior.
In summary, this essay discussed how the law can or cannot change human behavior. In my opinion, I believe that the law can change human behavior by conditioning them to do certain actions. I suggest that we continue to teach law to members of society especially to children so they will grow up to be law-abiding citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...le believe that the law cannot change a persons behavior. Old habits die hard. It is a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, thus, while, for example, in summary, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84955752212 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54050128158 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530973451327 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.862698729 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.8888888889 112.824112599 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5555555556 22.9334400587 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447409579888 0.215688989381 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17026800103 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157249383366 0.0843802449381 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321813976266 0.15604864568 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575955088183 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.2329268293 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.96 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.4329268293 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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