Television has become a tremendous part of human life and has sparked a heated debate on its importance. Some say that it is an integral part of society and it acts as a platform to increase communication and social awareness. Others say that its only good for companionship and leisure. This essay will discuss why the television should be treated as an essential part of society.
Because of the entertainment factor that television provides, some people believe that it only helps people as a companion to daily life. Most people who stay at home spend their time watching television so they will not grow bored of their daily life. For example, studies show that more people in senior years are spending most of their time on television than any other activity. This should convince people that television is a good companion and activity.
However, more than the entertainment and companionship it offers, television is an important part of human life as it provides a good medium to spread awareness to a bigger audience. Television provides a platform for people to learn about news and discoveries that they would not otherwise know about. A perfect example is the story about the first man landing on the moon. People may have not believed that man was able to reach and conquer the moon if the video footage was not shown on television. Thus, television provides more credible evidences and facts to life which is why it has become an integral part of society and our every day life.
In conclusion, this essay discussed about the benefits of television to entertainment and social awareness. In my opinion, television companies have the obligation to use the powers of television to promote social issues that can provide greater impact to the improvement of human life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
...tching television so they will not grow bored of their daily life. For example, studies ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7758061892 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493333333333 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9073246757 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274653496307 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967431086746 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573851550227 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165535266323 0.151781067708 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466469165162 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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