You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
The Internet is now used all around the world as a source of information and communication. However, it's often controversial, so many people think it needs to be controlled. Others believe there should be no interference whatsoever.
Discuss both points of view, and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In today's modern era of technology, the internet has a great influence on day to day life of people. People rely more on the internet for gathering information and it is also used much as a platform to socialize with each other. It is pretty much argued that the internet should be controlled more or it should not be interfered with. I believe that there should be a balanced approach, some features or functions of the internet should be controlled while the rest of it should be free without any surveillance or monitoring. Further paragraphs will be dedicated to details on these views and a balanced approach will be discussed also.
On the first hand, there is a lot of content on the internet which needs to be controlled as it may cause harm to ur society in several ways. Nowadays, the internet is used a lot as a source of information and communication where people browse the world wide web for information and many use internet-based applications like WhatsApp, Facebook, and Instagram to socialize within their community In recent years, innumerable where some anti-social elements have used these platforms to spread rumors and communal hatred as well as for promoting and selling illegal or banned substances. For example, the reason behind the communal riots that occurred in Bengaluru (a city in the southern part of India) was a controversial Facebook post that was posted from a fake account.
Although, there are many inappropriate things to be controlled on the internet which led to increased surveillance. People do not feel comfortable on some websites as they believe their information is not private. For the sake of security, many of the applications and websites are having access to their user's data. This kind of control over people's information is a breach of their privacy. A recent documentary named 'The Social Dilemma' is based on the experience shared by ex-employees of social networks like Facebook and Twitter, where they revealed how these giants can access the data of any user and peep in your chats.
To summarise, I believe that the content on the internet should be controlled by monitoring and restricting inappropriate and illegal activities while the control should be limited and should not affect the privacy of the users.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2023-05-10 | hieu13092006 | 73 | view |
| 2022-06-14 | longpham2k | 84 | view |
| 2021-08-05 | Magilou | 78 | view |
| 2021-02-25 | phamkhuyen | 56 | view |
| 2020-12-15 | aj93 | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 528, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...without any surveillance or monitoring. Further paragraphs will be dedicated to details...
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Line 1, column 633, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...d a balanced approach will be discussed also. On the first hand, there is a lot o...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun use seems to be countable; consider using: 'many uses'.
Suggestion: many uses
... the world wide web for information and many use internet-based applications like WhatsA...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...that was posted from a fake account. Although, there are many inappropriate things to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, well, while, as for, for example, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01055408971 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92556339863 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503957783641 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.1465115554 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.642857143 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0714285714 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345082022145 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122337956427 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921290193197 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215302962319 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073461974711 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.