The table and charts give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed

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The table and charts give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

The information below provides the details on where the police budget of a particular area of Britain came from in 2017 and 2018, as well as where it was spent. The table outlines the source of money and the charts show how it was broken down. The measurements are pounds and percent

Overall, the National Government provided money the most for the police during two years duration, and most of them were used to pay wages.

In 2017, the total budget of the police was 304.7 million, including 177.5m from the National Government, which dominated about 60%, Local Taxes made 91.2m and the rest was from other sources, with 38m. 75% of the full income was put into salaries for officers and staff. The second place was buildings and transport with 17%, this remained in 2018, and the last 8% was contributed to technology.

However, in 2018, all the money increased, resulting in a rise in the total. Local Taxes surged by nearly 10m, this growth was five times bigger than the National Government’s, which stood at about 178m in 2018. The income from other sources stayed almost stable and reached 38.5m at last. While the percentage spent on salaries of officers and staff dropped insignificantly by 5%, the fund for technology went up to 14%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the charts show how it was broken down. The measurements are pounds and percent ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81944444444 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47296337205 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2403580888 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.1 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344715111904 0.215688989381 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122053236678 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121275903265 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208149684864 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.18892558717 0.0819641961636 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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