The table bellow gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets

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The table bellow gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets

These pie charts given information on the proportion of charbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. The data presents in percentage. Overall, it can be seen that the higest percentage on the proportion was carbohydrates while the most bellow trend was fat.

In three different diets, carbohydrates got average percent 50% which the higest category with the following details was average diet got 40%, healthy diet got 50%, and healthy diet for sport got 60%. Followed by protein which median percent was 31.67% was the second highest with the following details was average diet got 40%, healthy diet got 30%, and healthy diet for sport got 25%. And the last followed by fat which average percent was 18.33% with the following details was average diet got 20%, healthy diet got 20%, and healthy diet for sport got 15%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 33.7804878049 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0071942446 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50888385829 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 64.0 106.607317073 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460431654676 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 189.9 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.706113721 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20673431428 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131834127991 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108538914426 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212976936264 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920247627352 0.0819641961636 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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