The table below gives information about the average annual spending of university students in three different countries.
The assigned table illustrates the information about the university educatees average yearly expenditures in the three distinct nations.
At a fleeting glance it is immensely clear that, regarding accommodation the top seat is notched by the country A with 45% and the food expenses in country A is half of accommodation . Besides this, in country B the average annual expenditures on books is 9% and in country C it is 21%. The spendings on accommodation in country B and country C is 35% and 30%, respectively.The proportion of money that spend on leisure in country A is 22% while ,12% spend in the country C in the same category and in country B the expenditure on leisure sector is about two fold of country C.
Further scrutinising the chart,the books are ranked last in country A with priests of 3% and in country C last seat grabbed by other with only 1% of average yearly expenses. The percentage of other annual spendings is 5% in country B and in country A the other section cantain 8%. The total spending in country A is highest ranked which is 5000 US dollars per annum however, country B and country C average annual expenditures is 4500 US dollars and 1500 US dollars , sequentially.
Overall it is lucid that most striking fact that emerge from graph is high amount of money incurred on the accommodation however, in country C food cantain the lion's share of money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, regarding, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 242.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73966942149 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9693718938 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46694214876 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5949147451 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.375 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.25 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322435952454 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158006438662 0.103423049105 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860312575154 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194649383668 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100952872635 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.