The table below gives information about student enrolments at Manchester University in 1937, 1967 and 2017.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table below presents the data about the enrolment of students at Manchester United in 1937, 1967 and 2017. This essay illustrates key observations of the given figure.
Overall, the number of students enrolled that went up considerably from 327 to 6254 students over the course of 80 years (between 1937 and 2017). The proportion of students in terms of being female and overseas that experienced remarkably while there was a strong decline in those about being male and regional.
As can be seen from this table, the ratio of female and male students commenced, being 45% and 55% respectively in the first stage of the period (1937). Featuring a notable change, in 2017, the percentage of female students transformed the last position together with those of male students (55% versus 45%) rather than the beginning stage
To begin with British students who started any given years with 55% and Manchester United could attract the number of international students with only 6% in 1937. The regional students constitued for the lowest proportion among 4 kinds of students ( only 1-2%) in 2017. Another noteworthy observation is that the number of local students plunged and reached the bottom with nearly 1-2% while those of international students grew significantly to 32% at the end of given period ( 2017)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...37. Featuring a notable change, in 2017, the percentage of female students transf...
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...rsus 45% rather than the beginning stage To begin with British students who start...
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...est proportion among 4 kinds of students only 1-2% in 2017. Another noteworthy ob...
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...worthy observation is that the number of local students plunged and reached the b...
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...cantly to 32% at the end of given period 2017
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10697674419 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68741433008 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544186046512 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.7164111749 43.030603864 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.25 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215027836734 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114524134075 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113897534499 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157054987255 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790197528517 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...37. Featuring a notable change, in 2017, the percentage of female students transf...
^^
Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e students transformed the last position together with those of male students 55%...
^^
Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rsus 45% rather than the beginning stage To begin with British students who start...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 248, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...est proportion among 4 kinds of students only 1-2% in 2017. Another noteworthy ob...
^^
Line 7, column 321, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...worthy observation is that the number of local students plunged and reached the b...
^^
Line 7, column 476, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cantly to 32% at the end of given period 2017
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10697674419 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68741433008 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544186046512 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.7164111749 43.030603864 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.25 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215027836734 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114524134075 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113897534499 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157054987255 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790197528517 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.