The table below highlights data on the number of travellers using three major British airports between 1998 and 2003

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The table below highlights data on the number of travellers using three major British airports between 1998 and 2003.

Submitted by steward on Fri, 07/13/2018 - 06:10

The table illustrates information about how many passengers who used three categories of major airports in England over the course of 5 years starting in 1998.

Overall, it is immediately obvious that there were a considerable upward trend in the number of visitors of both Gatwick and Stansted airport . While the number of people using Heathrow airport fluctuated over the period shown.

Looking at the details, the figure for Gatwick airport stood at 36.5 million of people, which was the highest point in 1998. While the number of passengers using Heathrow and the Stansted airport was lower, at 27.2 million and 17.3 million. Despite rising considerably to reach the peak at 48.2 million in 2000, the figure for Heathrow then fell dramatically to 33.2 million over the next 2 years, finishing at 45.6 million in 2003.

If we look at Stansted, the number of visitors rose sharply from 17.3 million in 1998 to 39.9 million in 2000, the number then leveled off at just 43.3 million by 2003. The trend was similar in the number of travelers using the Gatwick airport, went up steadily to 69.3 million, which was the highest number of the whole graph.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ors of both Gatwick and Stansted airport . While the number of people using Heathr...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of both Gatwick and Stansted airport . While the number of people using Heathrow air...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91836734694 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46340946639 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55612244898 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9254502709 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222946628012 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115892558673 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595015292675 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159889987369 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517511562293 0.0819641961636 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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