The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and banana in 1999 and 2004 in five european countries.

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The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and banana in 1999 and 2004 in five european countries.

The given table shows the total sales of coffee and bananas from Fairtrade-labelled in the UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden between 1999 and 2004.

Overall, it can be seen that generally, the sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas had increased in both goods except for two countries: Sweden and Denmark.

In 1999, the coffee sales ranged from €0.8 millions to three milions. However, five years later, the UK had the most significant coffee sales at € 20 million. In contrast, Switzerland spent money on this € three million in 1999 and consumed a double amount of it in the last year. Although the remained three countries preferred to drink more coffees in 2004 compared to 1999, the figure of sales showed a slight rise.

The most remarkable feature in banana's sales was that there was a dramatic soar in sales in Switzerland from € 15 million at the beginning of the period to approximately € fifty million. On the other hand, the UK and Belgium spent much less than that of Switzerland, ranging from only € 1 million and 0.6 million respectively in 1999, and in 2004 its figures went up to €5.5millions and €4 millions in each country. In the meantime, the sales of this fruits in Sweden and Denmark drop a little to € one million and €0.9 millions in 2004 from €1.8 million and more or less € 2 million respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '€20'.
Suggestion: €20
...ad the most significant coffee sales at € 20 million. In contrast, Switzerland spen...
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Line 8, column 110, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '€15'.
Suggestion: €15
...matic soar in sales in Switzerland from € 15 million at the beginning of the period ...
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Line 8, column 286, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '€1'.
Suggestion: €1
... that of Switzerland, ranging from only € 1 million and 0.6 million respectively in...
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Line 8, column 447, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... country. In the meantime, the sales of this fruits in Sweden and Denmark drop a lit...
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Line 8, column 573, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '€2'.
Suggestion: €2
...2004 from €1.8 million and more or less € 2 million respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, except for, in contrast, more or less, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86808510638 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84371870614 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514893617021 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5020045405 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.111111111 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1111111111 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252540018341 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132362148647 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880389650685 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202293764521 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866599976547 0.0819641961636 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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