The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The two tables above illustrate sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in the years 1999 and 2004 in the uk, switzerland, denmark, belgium, and sweden. Units are measured in millions of euros.
Overall, it is clear that the most coffee sales were in the uk in both 1999 and 2004. this number was the least in sweden during the given years. In 1999 and 2004 sales of bananas were the highest in switzerland and the lowest in sweden and denmark in 1999 and 2004, respectively.
From 1999 by 2004 sales of coffee increased in all countries. The most significant rise was seen in the uk. coffee sales grew from 1.5 million euros to 20, whereas in switzerland this number doubled. In the other 3 countries, this figure rose slightly between 0.8 and 2 million euros.
Over the given period, bananas sales grew in the uk, switzerland, belgium, while in sweden and denmark the trends were opposite. sales of bananas saw the most notable increase in belgium from 0.6 million euros to 4. this number tripled in switzerland from 15 to 47. Similarly, in the uk the sales were 5.5 times higher in 2004. In contrast, in sweden and denmark these numbers declined insignificantly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95073891626 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70981635201 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48275862069 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3837883015 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7857142857 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270396665373 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105816390903 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113892666961 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203598627223 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703037285951 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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